Hi, I like your dark poem, maybe because i write dark and sad poems most of the time, so i can relate to this feeling pretty good. I like your words choices, the topic, is vivid, sad and little depressing, but this is the way the poet feels in his soul. the words in between the stanzas makes your poem flow richly i see some very creative images, your poetic persona is unique and different. Well done.
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